Comments on: “Our greatest trials yet lie before us.” (2/4)

By: kamaliaetalia

kamaliaetalia — Thu, 28 Feb 2013 06:52:12 +0000

Thank you! In writing this story, I thought a lot about what type of personality would be attracted to the Huojin versus what type of personality would be attracted to the Tushui, and I’m glad that I was able to make those personality differences come across clearly.

By: red cow

red cow — Thu, 28 Feb 2013 06:34:12 +0000

Ahhh Kora! She’s so serious ^_^ I think she would be constantly irritated by me – I am fidgety like Kaoling. You did a great job setting up the two personalities, and both are still perfectly likable in their own unique way!!

By: kamaliaetalia

kamaliaetalia — Wed, 23 Jan 2013 22:24:55 +0000

I’m glad you’re enjoying it! Another challenge for me, with this story, was giving Kaoling and Koralyra distinct “voices”. I’m not sure how well I succeeded, though.

By: Navimie

Navimie — Wed, 23 Jan 2013 21:33:48 +0000

I really like fiction written from our character’s point of view with questline stuff in it. I did laugh at Koralyra falling off whilst admiring the view! Thanks for the great read Kam, looking forward to 3rd installment.